You!
I haven't taken a breath
since we last spoke,
and suffocating never felt so good,
but I can't live like this,
between moments,
between spasms of you,
and all the exhaustion of need.
I've thought to call,
but I've never been one
to press buttons on you.
since we last spoke,
and suffocating never felt so good,
but I can't live like this,
between moments,
between spasms of you,
and all the exhaustion of need.
I've thought to call,
but I've never been one
to press buttons on you.
13 Comments:
BEA....UTI ..FUL!!!!!
amazing saad... when i read it earlier..when it had not been posted..i loved it then.. and i still love it
you are too good buddy..
keep writing..!!
its really good...theres no doubt ur a good writer
you've got to tell me on whom did u rite it..
hehhe yeah mehwish loves this poem... its amazing saad.. keep wiritng...
du du du du dud dud dud dud dude
ure amazing
its awesome mindblowing n absolutely faaaaaaaaaaaaantastic, n y not its been ritten by such a creative writer n about such n mindblowing, kool, dandy, awesome gr8, waafir alaaa, n de most beautiful girl in de world......uhummmmm uhmmmmmmmm "ME" thanx sid.............thank u very much.keep up de gud work yaar.
Ahhhh....this has to be ur best ever!
this one has always been my favorite.
i mean really!!! u nailed it! its unt! ;)
hey but dontcha think there's a typo...just noticed it...in the last line? or did i get it wrong before?
ok this was the one i told u abt....that i hav copied alreadyyyy...lolz....
was real short saad....but it said abt a life time of emotion...its depth.....the beauty....the little itchy feeling....n some sweet smiles.....in sessions of hue.....
marvellous....n more so heart melting wen it reaches the last line...
saad.. yeh number 3 4 5 hay kiya ..lol
the no. is 3 4 9 9 2...get it?
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