Sunday, October 30, 2005

You!

I haven't taken a breath
since we last spoke,
and suffocating never felt so good,
but I can't live like this,
between moments,
between spasms of you,
and all the exhaustion of need.
I've thought to call,
but I've never been one
to press buttons on you.

13 Comments:

Blogger meshwork said...

BEA....UTI ..FUL!!!!!
amazing saad... when i read it earlier..when it had not been posted..i loved it then.. and i still love it
you are too good buddy..
keep writing..!!

Monday, November 07, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its really good...theres no doubt ur a good writer

you've got to tell me on whom did u rite it..

Monday, November 07, 2005  
Blogger benz said...

hehhe yeah mehwish loves this poem... its amazing saad.. keep wiritng...

Tuesday, November 08, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

du du du du dud dud dud dud dude
ure amazing

Wednesday, November 09, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its awesome mindblowing n absolutely faaaaaaaaaaaaantastic, n y not its been ritten by such a creative writer n about such n mindblowing, kool, dandy, awesome gr8, waafir alaaa, n de most beautiful girl in de world......uhummmmm uhmmmmmmmm "ME" thanx sid.............thank u very much.keep up de gud work yaar.

Wednesday, November 09, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ahhhh....this has to be ur best ever!

this one has always been my favorite.

i mean really!!! u nailed it! its unt! ;)

Friday, November 11, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey but dontcha think there's a typo...just noticed it...in the last line? or did i get it wrong before?

Friday, November 11, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ok this was the one i told u abt....that i hav copied alreadyyyy...lolz....

was real short saad....but it said abt a life time of emotion...its depth.....the beauty....the little itchy feeling....n some sweet smiles.....in sessions of hue.....

marvellous....n more so heart melting wen it reaches the last line...

Saturday, November 26, 2005  
Blogger meshwork said...

saad.. yeh number 3 4 5 hay kiya ..lol

Friday, December 09, 2005  
Blogger Saad said...

the no. is 3 4 9 9 2...get it?

Wednesday, December 21, 2005  
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