Regret
It's not for laws I've broken
That bitter tears I've wept,
But solemn vows I've spoken
And promises unkept;
It's not for sins committed
My heart is full of regrets,
but gentle acts omitted,
Kind deeds I did not do.
I have outlived the blindness,
The selfishness of youth;
The canker of unkindness,
The cruelty of truth;
The searing hurt of rudeness . . .
By mercies great and small,
I've come to reckon goodness
The greatest gift of all.
Let us be helpful ever
to those who are in need,
And each new day endeavour
To do some gentle deed;
For faults beyond our grieving,
What kindliness a tone;
On earth by love achieving
A Heaven of our own.
That bitter tears I've wept,
But solemn vows I've spoken
And promises unkept;
It's not for sins committed
My heart is full of regrets,
but gentle acts omitted,
Kind deeds I did not do.
I have outlived the blindness,
The selfishness of youth;
The canker of unkindness,
The cruelty of truth;
The searing hurt of rudeness . . .
By mercies great and small,
I've come to reckon goodness
The greatest gift of all.
Let us be helpful ever
to those who are in need,
And each new day endeavour
To do some gentle deed;
For faults beyond our grieving,
What kindliness a tone;
On earth by love achieving
A Heaven of our own.
8 Comments:
incredible...
seriously saad..its beautiful...
and hey welcome to the world of blogging..its just the write medium to showcase the amazing work you do..
good luck..
aur yar itni sarii posts... thora time do..sub parhnay ka..:)
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Just great job!
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its a gr8 piece like alwats... amazing work .. keep it up man :)
Eid mubarak..!!!
hey its nice.....yeah very....i like the whole attitude of the poem....all goin negative and questions upon questions revealing the subject matter....
but i feel that u shudn't hav added the last stanza(stanza hi hota hai na,i mean the one starting from 'let us be helpful...)
....the poem was goin all vague and it was all about denial....the conclusion was that u did learn to appreciate goodness in the end...but that shud be it...don't continue with the sermons......it kills the whole vagueness and interesting mood of the well-written poetry.
i feel that it shud end at 'the greatest gift of all'.....and the last stanza starting from 'let us be helpful ever' is a complete short poem with a differnt mood altogether.
get what i mean? its all about 'regret' ....so where doz the sermon fit in? mayb the sermon could be a part of a poem that u write in reply to all these questions...and all this regret in this poem.
but hey that's just a suggestion....mayb u feel it some other way....anywayz good job on the whole!
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