IF
If you have seen the thoughts,
That were in those cries.
If you could imagine,
The evening in my eyes.
If you could see the delight
That I had in simple things
When mirth was flying
on its silvery wings
If only you could touch
The desire everyone's suppose to drink
If only you could reach for the earth
And touch the never-ending sky.
How heart rendering would it be
When this wind was blowing high
If only you could see
The number of times I had to die.
If only you could see
The valiant, brilliant start that
Shines in the hollow my
If only you knew the task
Of god damn victory
If only you knew
The honor of those who lose.
If only you knew the difference
That's not their but mine
If only you knew the part,
The part that was reality
I could have sworn,
oh! I could Have sworn
That yours was not the heart.
That were in those cries.
If you could imagine,
The evening in my eyes.
If you could see the delight
That I had in simple things
When mirth was flying
on its silvery wings
If only you could touch
The desire everyone's suppose to drink
If only you could reach for the earth
And touch the never-ending sky.
How heart rendering would it be
When this wind was blowing high
If only you could see
The number of times I had to die.
If only you could see
The valiant, brilliant start that
Shines in the hollow my
If only you knew the task
Of god damn victory
If only you knew
The honor of those who lose.
If only you knew the difference
That's not their but mine
If only you knew the part,
The part that was reality
I could have sworn,
oh! I could Have sworn
That yours was not the heart.
posted by Saad at 3:45 AM
5 Comments:
saad... good work really..
i wonder for whom do u write all of these... whoeva SHE may be...made u write good stuff... the reason behind me saying tht theres some1, cuz all the poems are sad.. tryn' write something cheerful, m sure u can
would like to read u more... keep writting..
All the best.. Take all the cares
if.....
"How heart rendering would it be
When this wind was blowing high
If only you could see
The number of times I had to die."
MIND BLOWING...
i specially love this part... absolutely love it...
you are way too good.. get these things published and we'd be celebarating your bdays too like that of allama iqbal...lol...
cheers...
if i had words to begin a comment here wud hav returned a poetic phrase atleast...
callin it amazing or wonderful puts in down frm the level of dignity that it has...i wont lie....twas painful....once that i read it time bak....n even now that i scanned it once more....it says so much...but honestly shows that a heart of gold broke to ashes...then only one cud voice the last lines that u did....one story that wud cause an eye to cry....
"IF"...
the gap!!!... you filled most of it by writing that...
good piece o' work!
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