...Random Thoughts...
As I picked the glass that seemed to be a soul... its bubbles tickling ma nose as I sipped them... sip by sip I felt different emotions engulfing me....
Feelings of sorrow, spite, deceit, off hate, off malice ... feelings that meant nothing yet everything.... I stopped there was yet one sip left... I didn’t have the courage to take it in... I stopped and kept the glass which contained a soul...Did I stop too soon? Maybe that last sip may have had the love or happiness or content I might have longed for ... but somehow I didn’t have the courage... to take in that one last sip... the bubbles still emerging within the glass... sparkling bright ... I left the glass thinking ... should I have opened the Pandora’s box or was it ok that I left it lying there ... alone, lost and waiting for someone to get the soul to feel the last bit of sanity left in it...
The glass still contained part of a soul... the rest was already devoured by mine...
Feelings of sorrow, spite, deceit, off hate, off malice ... feelings that meant nothing yet everything.... I stopped there was yet one sip left... I didn’t have the courage to take it in... I stopped and kept the glass which contained a soul...Did I stop too soon? Maybe that last sip may have had the love or happiness or content I might have longed for ... but somehow I didn’t have the courage... to take in that one last sip... the bubbles still emerging within the glass... sparkling bright ... I left the glass thinking ... should I have opened the Pandora’s box or was it ok that I left it lying there ... alone, lost and waiting for someone to get the soul to feel the last bit of sanity left in it...
The glass still contained part of a soul... the rest was already devoured by mine...
13 Comments:
hmmmmmmmm......well..... what i understand from this is ..."absolutely nothing"... you said you were trying to how your confusion.. buddy post leaves me confused..lol..
nevertheless..it seems good...
saad itni garhi likhi hai mere bhi sumujh nahi aaya
its all abt making choices...hold it within u wht u have in tht glass or leave tht glass just over there and attain nothing...its all abt the courage to say yes and the strength to say no...the choice attracts u a lot...makes u move towards u...opens its arms to hold u in...u loose ur sane...u r all in confusion...u do finish whole of the drink but wht is left is the last drink...the last decision tht u make...changes everything...its all wht u choose for...but u r all confused
oh okay... get it now..
yeh kehna tha na.. soul and glasses and spilling kyun kaha..lol...
nah it was a nice post as a;ways//
very intense!!
i dont know about this but ...... dayem the post below (the poetry) fucking good... :)
alrite now ....its time for the plate, knife and spoons..lol...
actually i cant make u all understand..coz its really abstract..u wont grasp it they way i seee it
its a pity that the fellow bloggers didnt understand the beauty of this post.
awwwwwwwww saad... i read this post again... now understand it... its so beautifully played with words n emaotiond... sadaf ur r ight its jsut awsome...
dunt worry somethigns are jsut left as it is...
saad.....you need to update..its been ages...
and im alrite...:)
:)
ur work is worth more than just praise.....i actually feel puttin in futile effort to tell hao much the prose meant.....very deep.....its hard....very hard.....to take that last decision.....n at times....we make the right choice we know that.....but just cant cum to terms with our own choices.....this is where the conflict of heart n mind starts.......we r thinkers....so avoid deciding it at the spur of teh moment....we think ....n think too much b4 that last sip.....although had we not thought that much...cud hav been a happier soul......n y sharing all this here.....i dont know.....but u write amazing....some what the same as my heart has to say....
best wishes saad!
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